五年级英语作文及点评:My Birthday Party

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My Birthday Party Every year, when it’s birthday, my parents hold a party for me. Th…

My Birthday Party

Every year, when it’s birthday, my parents hold a party for me. They invitemy friend to come to my house to celebrate my birthday. I can get many beautifulgifts every year. In my party, we can do many things:

1. Light the candles.

2. Sing a “Happy Birthday” song.

3. Make a wish.

4. Blow out the candles.

5. Cut off the cake.

6. Eat the cake.

7. Open the presents.

8. Sing and dance.

9. Watch videos or play other games.

10. Say goodbye with each other.

That’s my birthday party, is it interesting?

  要点评价】

书写:这篇小学作文是按主题活动的次序来写的,叙事了生日派对的各类实际主题活动,较为全方位。较为之前好多个模块的创作书写,这一小短文按主题活动次序较为适合。时态:这篇小短文可以用三种时态来写:

1、一般将来时:关键表明生日派对份的各类方案,都将怎样开展。

2、一般现在时:关键表明习惯性上怎样渡过每一个生辰。

3、一般过去时:关键表明你的生日派对是怎样开展的。

句式:invite sb. to do sth. 邀约别人做某件事

留意:因为这篇小短文很有局限,所表述的大致都基本一致,因此 在撰写的情况下要留意融合自身的具体主题活动与画面感去写。此外留意一些语句和英语单词的撰写不必产生不正确:eg.“吹蜡烛”要写出“blowout the candles”而不可以写出“blow candles”。

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